Magical Manipulations! A adventure.

Nov 27, 2010
Hello friends! I hope this is an appropriate post for this thread, it seemed like the best fit.

I have been a long time lurker of this site, posting only a few times and only about "Time-Stop" games. A few days ago, I decided to try my hand at making a text Choose-Your-Own-Adventure on the website,

It is a fantasy-based Dungeons and Dragons type world where you, a simple peasant, discover a magical tome that imbues you with power! The main threads I focus on are the "Time-Stop" and "Mind Control" branches of the story. There are currently just a little over 10 chapters, about 12,000 or so words. I would love to hear your input and feedback.

Link to story: